F.i.in.e Moods
I haven't the slightest clue how you manage to pull these off! Amazing is all I can say at this point :) Makes me want to try to write in a shape like that, but I'm not all too convinced I'd manage lol :)
2013-05-31

Rob Graber
It's cool how the final lines compose a narrow base indeed. At least the legs are straight (for now), giving reason for hope? Clever!
2013-04-30

A very well crafted write :-)
The comparison of body and soul is striking and a little disturbing.
Applause!
2013-04-29

shells
Wow! Lovely in both form and words, I love the fact that "a throat" is in the right place!
2013-04-29

Just the shape alone deserves an applause--it's almost perfectly sculpted from words. Nice words too :).

William
2013-04-29

I try, and fail, to think what c.i. might say about this poem. I say it is an upright poem about a TEMPORARILY downtrodden soul. The throat may yet unclench. Perhaps some Rocky Road ice cream will help.
2013-04-29

Chaucer Whethers
Highly talented word choice and placement.
(Does it just have one leg, or am I looking at
this in profile? Oh that's Ok..I see now.)
2013-04-29

*Standing Ovation* LOVE IT. The shape of a person with all the words in the right places... {Why didn't I think of this?} :)
2013-04-29