This was written like a year ago --> i was not really sure if i should post it.
but umm here it is now....I know the ending is a bit blah...but i really do miss my bunny :|


Incomplete.

Here alone.

A little tear.

In pain I moan,

Filled with fear.

Knowing that you're not my own.

I've got no missed calls on the phone.

Out of your heart and mind I was thrown.

Before you left and ruined it alL,

Like a star I had shone.

But you let me fall.

Now I have trouble standing tall.

I would've given you my all.

But here I am pretending; with dolls.

You made me trust you

Get so close to you,

And just when I thought that it's true,

You left me alone, cold and blue.

I have trouble getting through my day.

The skies are always gray.

but for Your happiness, I still pray.

May your days be bright and gay.

I've run out of things to say,

But your face still haunts me everyday,

Always gets in my way.

And on my bed I lay,

Wondering when all these nightmares will go away.

I kept begging you to stay,

But you decided that we had to part our ways.

I miss you,

I hope somewhere, you're missing me too.

I'm doing everything I can do,

To get over you,

But memories of you are unforgettable,

It's like they've been stuck in my heart with super glue.

You hurt me so much, I wish i could sue,

But this heart of mine still loves you,

And there's nothing much I can do.

Why did you do this to me?

I was all that i wished to be,

Don't you see?

I was all crazy and funny.

And then you said you had to leave,

And the days are no more sunny.

What happened to the person I first met?

The one that was as sweet as honey?

And used to give me butterflies in my tummy?

And made me feel okay every time i missed Mummy?

I really miss you, Bunny.




Poetry by aquadragon
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Written on 2013-05-02 at 17:44

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Your work - works fore me - very well compost - well thought out. Strait Off The Bat - as you were thinking.
Ken
2016-01-17


aquadragon
hehe yeah lighten up :D

and @ Rik thank you (:
2013-05-02


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Very well written. The sense of loss, of for the one cared and loved, conveyed with feelings straight form the heart.
2013-05-02



{Sorry} Maybe I'd better lighten up, lol? :)
2013-05-02


aquadragon
i don't know what to say to that.
but yeah, i agree :|
2013-05-02



I think most of us can relate to that incomplete feeling. And many of us are probably walking around missing pieces but moving steadily through life anyway, not knowing what else to do... I would say that finding that 'complete' feeling is difficult for us all.
2013-05-02