I must say as well that this poem is so inspired that it made all of us want to sing like birds, and since we can, we like the song that you sing with your words. This is beautiful!
~Ashe
2014-01-12

Nina Lee
Oh my goodness what a treat! Your flavor like candy napkins folded so neat; I did touch that rainbow you mentioned. To dance where there is no music yet keeping perfect time. You win.
2013-06-06

Morning Star
Beautiful poem, so well written and such a lovely sentiment of nature intertwined with freedom and expression.
2013-05-08

Elle
Dawn at this time of year is magical, this made me think of the chrysalis coming out of the cocoon - if all could be just that melody :-)

Elle
2013-05-04

I really like this one. Each time I come to the word 'spring,' I have to ask myself if this is the spring of memory or the current state of being. The words she has made the place great for the stage ... stand out. It's the longest line in length and is the only one with that particular punctuation. And finally, I love the last two stanzas. They're quite beautiful.
2013-05-03

I sense that there are thoughts and emotions between the words here. Since we are not birds who sing, we need to express our appreciation of spring and the Earth Mother through poetry or other art. I really like the first line, pleasingly cryptic, but very melodic and lovely. Especially the play-on-word of the different meanings of the word 'spring.' And we should all have 'spring minds'--budding with new growth and joy.

William
2013-05-03

StillHoppin
"we need to make our time as beautiful as melody" - yes, we truly do. A lovely spring poem which I enjoyed reading!

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2013-05-03