ABCs/panic.


the abc's of panic


angry
bees
converge,
assailing

dissonant
energetic
frenzy
detains

apologetic
bumbling
coagulates
defeat

defense
estranged;
failure
gloats




Poetry by StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2013-05-05 at 03:54

Tags Panic  Anxiety  Abc 

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Another impressionistic rendering which has me wondering if you and your sister don't live in Wonderland.

Or, at least visit there occasionally.
2013-05-12


Rob Graber
I don't know what it means, but I like the alphabetic tinkering: abca/defd abcd/defg--the first two "quatrains" linked by parallel structure, the latter two by "d" itself. Brainy!
2013-05-06



Have you forgotten you ABCs, little sister? ;) Now, will write something happy for me? Pretty please? I'll even come over and give you that break that you're currently wondering if I'm ever gonna give you. ;)
2013-05-06


Phill
Interesting way of manipulating/interpreting stanzaic writing. I see what you did tharr... so to speak. Hopefully this sasquatch isn't squeaking either...
2013-05-06


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Panic is what happens when you give
yourself an alphabetical order
sequentially speaking.
( which may sound like Sasquatch squeaking )
No?
2013-05-05