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I have answered my own challenge by combine the lines .....
read my 'Steal [use] these lines as your own 2nd challenge'
and see what you come up

.....what ryhme can you reply in aswer?

Like A pimple [answering my own challenge]

I remember in the begining.....

white spray drenched me
with the blue salt of your deep-ocean love
and I thought you were an Angel
sent to me from high above.

but now.....

A sunshine smile hides the dying moon's tears
and you have preyed on my fears.

For like...

A pimple you squeeze the love from my heart,
Yet I still come back for more,
hoping that it would
revert back to how it was at the start.

When...

white spray drenched me
with the blue salt of your ocean-deep love
and you sent me flying [too] high
with the pure white wings of the dove.

Why.... do to you I keep coming back?

Where.... did it start to fall apart?

How..... will on you I get my revenge?

I do not not but one day you'll pay
it won't be now but someday..

.... I will finally walk away.

10/04/06

Poetry by liz munro