Haiku

the rain ends at dusk

raccoon tips the trash barrel

and the moon spills out





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2013-07-23 at 17:25

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Usually, I don't like haikus. The form is so constricted that it's hard to put anything worthwhile into it. You've managed to fill yours, Fog. Nice job.
2013-07-28


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
this makes me smile and recall my midnight wars with some really large well fed raccoons and my not so raccoon proof garbage cans. I finally won by resorting to a cap full of household ammonia in each can. I must admit I was not thinking poetically at the time :-)

Joe
2013-07-24


shells
The measured words are a delight, except it's foxes here. You manage to make an everyday senario into something much more.
2013-07-24