Finitius



Creation wanders
Attention earthlings submit
Line forms to the end




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Written on 2013-10-15 at 22:18

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Phill
Icy wat u did thar.

Cool poem, man!

Good use of simple form for a broader idea, though the last line may still be a bit ambiguous for my liking... but hey, who the heck am I, right?

Applauded.
2013-10-16