I don't know... I just really wrote this as it came, maybe I'll revise it later. But this is it for now, I hope you like it.


Misery Seeks Company

Misery seeks company,
when one falls in a hole
and cries out for another,

and the cries take their toll
on those above the depth
of the misery the fallen has

yet they jump down
into the pit of sorrow
despite the foolish move

and when it starts to rain
the hole of the fallen stirs
as the many fallen writhe

wanting to be heard
and as they writhe more join
and they grope for freedom as they drown

but the drowning doesn't end,
theres no dying in the hole
because death leads to misery

and so more come in place
and more drown as they struggle
to be free of their torment

but only the few get through,
climb all through the fallen
up out of the hole...

but then,
too late.
the damage is done.
the dead piled up for the ladder.



Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-04-15 at 03:24

Tags Zombie  Misery  Falling 

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she
Applause****applause*****This is an extremely well thought out poem that leaves me wondering how you manage to take words and weave them into something as beautiful as this.....plus it has taught me a thing or two.....I will never fall into that hole thanks to you :)
2006-04-28


ZaK
Sweet dude u truely are the best poet i know, we both, are truthfully wise beyond our years. Peace bro
we need to chill sometime too
2006-04-19


Teala
Dark and Chilling, a very good write.
2006-04-18


CherryFairy
Every time I read it, in my head I see something different each time.
You left enough open for imagination but the message is still understood and the story and actions are still seen.
-kg/cf
2006-04-17


PoeticProcrastination
I agree with Liz; this is absolutely brilliant. :) You rock!
2006-04-16


Mike
you speak with wisdom beyond your years..good stuff Andy..brilliant work
2006-04-15


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Brillent!

Such truth.

Liz
2006-04-15



Bravo!
That was well said.
Writing it as it comes or surges from deep within the writing self is usually the best way to go. After which the sometimes arduous task of revision. But that's for later.... some time much later.
2006-04-15


Kathy Lockhart
How old are you?!! My goodness the wisdom of this poem is amazing. Not only that, the visuals are outstanding. The moral of the story????? What is the result when we wallow in the misery of others in the guise of helping? More misery I'd say.
Good write. Kathy
2006-04-15