well?


whethers


if adam had been olaf
would men have olaf's oranges?
if he had been a kevin, would
he have had a kevin's kiwi?

and if bubbles broke the time machine
(hypothetically, of course)
but came back with evidence
that eve's forbidden fruit
was in fact a cherry
would that make up for it?




Poetry by Commentally Ill
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Written on 2014-03-05 at 00:19

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
hehehe... love it when the two of you go at it :D this is so good... good questions!
2014-03-09



Like it...
2014-03-07



Quite a jam.
Chortleth.
2014-03-05


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Deep ?
read.
2014-03-05


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
Very smart writing. I like it. The comparisons all work to build up for the last line, which is very astute.

Ashe
2014-03-05