Simple, short, probably something anyone could write... nothing fancy.


If I Could...

If I could fly,
I would

If I could forget sorrow forever,
I would

If I could make all my dreams true,
I would

but not if it hurt you.



Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-04-17 at 04:18

Tags Dream  Wish  Consequence 

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Nora
this sorta thing makes me wanna fall in love with the person who wrote this... that being you? well the emotion and everything behind it is amazing.. i love it
2006-07-28


PoeticProcrastination
So would I, but not if it hurt someone. Agree with all below, this poem R-O-C-K-S.
2006-04-17


Lourdes
Wisdom is unmarked by age.
You are proof of that.
This poem is grandious!
2006-04-17



As always, the most important part of any discourse is its "but" clause!

That is what lifted your poem from seemingy not-fancy to a literary loftiness!

Well done.

Read you again later.
2006-04-17


Mr.Mist
nothing fancy you say?? I must say it is...cant beleve you only 14 yrs old, and put so much meaning into so few words...got my bookmark, i will read this over, and over...

- Mr.M
2006-04-17