Flame

Few sparks did scatter

on an icy floor

before dying down

in a mass of dark soot.

 

Her glimpse did evoke

inspite all,

a painful

memory

 

One day callously

as she walked past.

 





Poetry by sagi
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Written on 2014-09-14 at 22:56

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Bibek
Short and sweet. :)
2016-05-18


Amim Akhter
One could burnt it all up...but what to do of those ashes..brautifully written my friend
2014-11-03


BM Barde
_One day callously
As she works pass me._
Drunked love this line, ure genius about her disregading. Nicely penned.
2014-09-15


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Lack of recognition for your existence and how much the strength of feelings for her would not be taken into account by her... poignant in a seizing way for me, where one side bleeds and the other shuns without any sort of reasons to do so... I like the choice of words, and the brevity... creates an impact that can't go unnoticed for the reader, in my opinion... beautifully written.
2014-09-15


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
hmmm ... haunting little poem. I like it! Very nice flow and vivid imagery.
2014-09-14