Closing The Circle

. . . ending the year as I began it, with haiku

 

 

this oak-paneled path

quiet as a library

where old leaves are turned

 

     waiting patiently

     sniffing each cantaloupe too

     the blind woman's dog

 

kite snagged all autumn

on a willow branch is gone

first day of winter

 

     breaking the silence

     suddenly all the hailstones

     fall at the same time

 

late leaving the woods

above the winter corn field

suddenly the moon

 

     watching the sparrows

     the cat sharpening his claws

     on the pine tree's trunk

 

so much is revealed

by the lifting of a stone

to find the poem

 

 

 





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2014-12-24 at 19:39

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You have clearly mastered the genre. Not a single one falls flat. I know how difficult it is to write a successful haiku, especially since we're using a language that doesn't work quite like Asian ones. I like number 1 and number 3 the best, but they're all stunning.
2014-12-25



Each a little picture in words, beautiful and serene. Thanks for sharing them.
~Ashe
2014-12-25