Lost Love

In my nightmares she has one mask
A vivid demon of my past
She drools out fiendish fire and flame
And as she burns I call her name
In vain, for she is lost to me
A distant, longing memory
My love, my soul, I called, I
cried
My love, my soul, you lied,
You lied!
Then vanished...
Gone
Into my mind
Bleeding inside all you find
Choking til I cannot speak
Cannot hear, cannot seek
Yet deep inside the Forge
Glows white
To cleanse you with its
Purging light
To be that beacon guiding
Me
To show that one true love
I see
In many vivid, wishful
Dreams
Where love shines bright and
Romance gleams



Poetry by ttius
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Written on 2015-02-12 at 13:27

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Jalaj Soni
Astounding work... It would make an extremely beautiful song..
2015-05-16



Very interesting composition and rhyme pattern, I agree, and truly emotional text. Passionate ... wow. Like it.
~Ashe
2015-02-12



I like the rhymes and partial rhymes. Flows smoothly down the text to a nice resolution at the end. Interesting line-breaks also. Bravo.
2015-02-12