On twitter I got to read an Italian Valentine's day rhyme and I liked it, felt inspired so I tried to create something original see if I can recreate the magic but it is what it is but I wanted to share either way:) Feel free to experiment as well:)


Writing experiment


The original poem that inspired me:


"In the morning, I don't eat because I think of you
(Valentine's day rhyme)

In the morning, I don't eat because I think of you,
At noon, I don't eat because I think of you,
In the evening, I don't eat because I think of you,
I don't sleep at night because I'm hungry."

In the morning I don't _______
because  _______
At noon I don't _____
because  _______
In the evening I don't ____
because  _______
I don't ____ at night
because _____ 

No title but *tada!* 

In the morning I don't lick my lips
because I feel so thirsty
At noon I wipe my lips with a napkin
because I feel full
In the evening I moisturize my lips
because I took a look in the mirror 
I don't need to lick my lips at night
because when I do I dream of kissing you







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Written on 2015-02-15 at 20:51

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