I hate it, when memories fade.


Less i forget

Granite memories
slowly sink
into the ebony pool of my mind
i catch a glimpse
of my forgotten rose
as the rest of time slips by
and as i slide
down the blade of my fears
my life
is cut in two
but in those moments
when my heart is free
i will only
think of you.


© Rik - 27/04/2006



Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-04-27 at 04:27

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Amanda K
you did strike me when u said ,at the beginning,Granite memories so strong in feeling and you did ended strongly in another way when u mentioned that u can 4get that person when u r free. i just loved ure poem.
2006-06-18


Daybreaker
WOW!

This one is awesome man!

The words just glide, pours down my spine! =)

Very well done!
2006-04-29



Granite memories - blade of fears
I'm sure that these two images won't fade from my memory for quite a long time...
2006-04-27


Kathy Lockhart
Very nice. Beautifully written with an abundance of imagery. I am moved by your words. : ) kathy
2006-04-27


Veld Cooper
Another absolutely beautiful write by our 'Poet of Love'. Congrats, Rik!
2006-04-27


Malin Johansson
Very touching poem rik.... great...
2006-04-27


John Ashleigh
I hate it also when memories fade. But they don't really fade, they just go on stand-by and are forced in the dark rooms at the back of our minds.

Everything our eyes witness, whether it be beauty or ugly, love or hate, a friend or an enemy, we can always recall those moments. :)

A very nice poem, I love the painful words of being cut into two. Fantastic write!
2006-04-27


BlueyedSoul
exquisite and tender....it made me cry

~BlueyedSoul
2006-04-27


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this poem is such a good text to mirror my own feelings and i thank you for the excellent way you have put it into words rgds mike
2006-04-27