Music

I sit here quietly
Listening to the
Music surrounding me
As only current technology allows
Within the orchestra

I sit virtually among the wood winds
A counterfeit spirit among these artists
Yet they tolerate my being here
A nameless montebank of no import
For I have paid them for my place

I much prefer the honest
stereo position of audience
Rather than surround sound's
Intimate ethereal fraud











Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-04-21 at 00:40

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LeMoustache
I love it, music is my best and closest friend, when I'm down, music always cheers me up. your poem is really good, so lovely.
2015-04-22


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very good. But we can only use what we have and though sound quality reproduction gets better all the time it can never replace live performances. As television can never replace theatre :)
2015-04-22


countryfog
Some, my brother included, say that the old LPs are still superior to the newer technology, the sound richer and more nearly "being there." I'm not enough of an audiophile to have an opinion, though I suspect that if there is truth to it, it is more true of classical and opera than other genre.

I recently attended a performance of Madama Butterfly and was moved to tears, as I have always been each time I hear it, but only when actually "being there."
2015-04-21


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
the headphones transport me, but it is not the same experience as being in the audience. each unique, but a fraud? maybe not?

"Yet they tolerate my being here"

respectfully, they do not tolerate you, they PLAY FOR YOU. without you, what would be the point? They are not birds singing for one another!

if i want to think interesting thoughts, i read one of your poems. han shan moves me deeply, but you are of this world, he is not.

i am argumentative, i know. i am used to give and take.
2015-04-21



I agree:)
Am loving your writes they have an ease with edge which I find highly appealing:)
2015-04-21