On The Anniversary Of His Passing

for my father (1920-2001) and my mother (1920-1990)

 

 

 

 

Ten years of darkened rooms now without her

By whose light and love he had done all that

Long years of marriage had asked of him, their

Endless acts of giving and receiving of all that

In their time came and had come to be done

Without conscious thoughts of gratitude or desire;

How the way two people who have never known

Any other had come into the knowing of all that

Was needful without ever needing to speak of it,

 

Though there is no comfort now in this silence,

Too many questions that he has no answers for,

As he looks through the dark window to stars

He is lost among without their names, and more

Often now the nights not remembering his own,

Yet knowing, if only from a deepening distance,

What he does not know: why is he still there,

Why the long passages of love and loss and

Still love have brought him now to only this?





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2015-05-03 at 01:32

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I find this a beautiful poem about love that is also a love poem. The relationship between your dear parents is described in a way that is very touching. We weep a little at BirdBrains and applaud quietly together.
2015-05-05


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
I've read and reread this a number of times now and finally feel I can comment on this poem.

There is a pining, a yearning here in words that only you could use to generate the loss and loneliness of having no one to comfort you. The sadness is palpable. The yin of a long fulfilling mutually caring relationship becomes the yang of stark and hopeless lonliness. I can't help but feel that in this instance the balance we would expect to see is not in effect. The residue of the grandeur of the love they had, must have carried him through to some sense of waiting for reuniting.
2015-05-04


shells
Beautifully sad, love always has questions. I hope you take some comfort in the writing.
2015-05-03


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very moving. Time takes loved ones away and quite often it leaves us to survive in a very empty world. Thanks for sharing this.
2015-05-03


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautifully put. Sad.
2015-05-03



This is exceptional in its understanding.
Bookmarking:)
2015-05-03