I am lost epiphany in a dragon smoke

I am lost epiphany in a dragon smoke
a weird creature's climb into soil memory
on ladders planted on smelly mire floor
just for the sake of seeing hell's origin bleed
in a laid back song of dark matter

"sedimentary" a voice whispered to me
"sedimentary and basically
a grave grief on the run"
I saw no reason to enter a plea
I had no time for a call

there is a certain strangeness
going around like a cold or a flu
a matter of seeing or interpreting
dullness as a fulfillment
of the dying child in you




Poetry by Bob
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Written on 2015-09-01 at 22:02

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
The last verse resonates with me. I fear that the young of today are like that. Making do with a today's pay packet and never knowing the heightened experiences they miss. Nice work.
2015-09-07


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
i really do enjoy your poems, and as i said recently, they bring images to mind that mean something to me, and in that way, the writer and reader are connected.
2015-09-02


Bob
Ha ha
Maybe it is not about understanding a meaning
but just another way to listen
2015-09-02



I tried the Acrostic backwards too and it didn't work either, but I love to read these poems as they form so many fantastic images in my mind. :)
Ashe
2015-09-02


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
your poems are très cryptic, but i broke the code. they're ACROSTICS. this poem, for example, spells out:

Iao ji "s "s aii tga do f.

! how cool is that?
2015-09-02