the world is cold but you are beautiful 




long gone

it turned...

just enough to break his spirit 

just enough to kill the sky 

 

it turned

and no one noticed

no one except for him 

sat there with his ugly

loneliness  

 

it will turn again one day

though by then

he'll be long gone

gone to the stars

gone to the light

that could never be found 

in this mortal noise 

 

there is no love

only tears

just survivors

fighting each other 

to survive 

 

you'll see...

 





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Written on 2015-09-19 at 19:41

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Ivan R
This hurts to the bone, it is a sad, sad piece of life
2015-09-23


shells
As Lawrence said, intriguing, sounds like the world is turning with your emotions, much enjoyed.
2015-09-19


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is intriguing. It also is, formally, a very nice poem.
2015-09-19