she makes me feel like a novice




walking up the hill toward tomorrow

 

 

~

 

"her voice is borne out through far-lying ways"

 

~

 

    busy, and thoughts a-jumble

haven't run for days

    the hills are beginning to steepen

 

    she opens the door, inviting me in

yellowish light on cream walls

    warmth on a chilly evening, how can i not

 

    we talk about life as we know it

imagining the rest

    she asks if i'll stay, she needn't ask

 

~

 

    now it is late, and it is time to be quiet

to think of being careful

    with each other, with ourselves

 

    to be kind, to be cautious without holding back

in this way we won't hurt each other

    or ourselves, and in this way two become one

 

    not in a mad rush

    but deliberately

 

~

 

    i am not a simple person to know

    she sees me as i am, in all my complexity

   

    still she invites me in

    how can i not

 

~

 

 

 

 

quote by Guido Cavalcanti (1250-1300)

Sonetto XXXV

 

 

 





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Written on 2015-10-22 at 08:47

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Nice. We were all novices once :)
2015-10-26


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A very pleasant poem, deftly written.
2015-10-22



This is so beautiful and tender. I love the feel of the vulnerability it reveals. A true masterpiece.
Ashe
2015-10-22


countryfog
One of the interesting things about reading and commenting is learning what parts of a poem resonate with different people. Your third stanza stuns me in my tracks, it is a poem unto itself, perhaps because it has never happened to me and much as I say now I wish it had I wonder if I would have had the courage to see it for what it might have been.
2015-10-22


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
A good and cautious beginning.
2015-10-22