Beautiful. I love how the rhyme shifts slightly like it is on a breeze, or like modulating keys. LOVE it. Enjoy the blue eyes.
2016-01-09

Deeps
Very very lovely
And it's alkaline because litmus turns it blue
2016-01-06

Jamsbo Rockda
brilliant.
2016-01-06

shells
Great comeback much enjoyed and I hope you are not suffering with the blues. Doesn't red litmus paper turn blue with alkaline solutions? I could add music your list.
2016-01-06

night soul woman
Hm wait a sec... hihi
Ok now, check this out :D!

Beck and call

born
To mourn

Basically

Feeling reborn
inside her eyes
& every-time she cries:

Hey baby, I hear the blues a-callin'

https://www.youtube.com/watch? v=dQx-H2av1PM
2016-01-05

Lawrence Beck
This is great, Rob. You've definiitely gotten the blues.
2016-01-05

one trick pony
i quite like this, though even with the help of wikipedia i cannot find a connection between alkaline and blue. i expect there is one, and i'll probably think of it just after i hit the "send comment" button.

i agree with elle, this has a touching sentimentality. très romantic, and the opening and closing lines (words) complement each other cleverly.

i would only add: vida
2016-01-04

Elle
You old softie, I enjoyed this, good to see you Rob

Elle x
2016-01-04

Lovely! Very nicely put together. It's good to see you here.
Ashe
2016-01-04