past as prologue, something mythical left undone




blue eyes

 

~

 

oh aye, the roiling waves 

with their come and go, like friends 

keep company when it suits 

and when it doesn’t, oh aye, alone

 

i say, blue eyes, come walk with me 

come leave prints with me in dusky sand 

to be washed away by hiss

and, oh aye you say, oh aye i will

 

oh aye, the spirit of the beach is grand

‘tis grand indeed, ‘tis the third 

of the trinity, the noisy one, the wind

the gull, the surf, the chaperone

 

the cold beach, the winter beach 

the rainy beach, oh aye, the dreary beach

and why, blue eyes, would you walk with me

oh aye, the beach is fair on dreary days.

 

‘tis grand indeed, the come and go

of roiling waves, oh aye, leaving footprints 

in dusky sand, coming back 

to what never was, walking, soon

 

~

 





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Written on 2016-01-20 at 15:16

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
A very nice rolling piece :)
2016-01-26


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
You brought me to the water's edge with this one. Nicely done.
2016-01-20


ternic2005
I completely agree with I never said that. I really enjoyed this poem
2016-01-20



The rhythm of this is great. The mood is so wistful. I love the line "'tis the third of the trinity, the noisy one," and "coming back to what never was." And I love the comment "something mythical left undone"--poetic enough to be included in the poem itself. When you're reduced to simply quoting the poem, it must be good.
2016-01-20