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Gently Do The Whispers Fall

Gently do the whispers fall-
To your ears honey dew
And slowly does your silken touch
Caress’ those spots few
That trigger off the erogenous centers
Of my senses anew....
Instantly do the smouldering cinders
Leap to passionate flames
Amber flames light up our souls-
Consume us through and through
Gently does your being enter
Deep niches of my soul
Warms up to my heart and
Engulfs my life-form, whole
Gently do I melt and melt
Slowly get consumed
Deep do I sink and sink
In sapphire seas of you…

Spent, quenched in your arms I lie
Sweet slumber, manna-dew!

Embers to flames-
Flames to ashes-
At your feet subdued…

Soul resurrects anew…



Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright©: Zoya Zaidi




Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-05-06 at 12:23

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Pamela A Lamppa
Well, indeed, I see what I have been missing. This is passionate and soul felt. Beautiflly penned. An asbsolute pleasure to read. Amazingly heated :o) ~Pam
2006-05-31



Ohhh wow!!
Zoya darling, reading this is like taking a luxurious bubble bath of passion!
2006-05-12


GB
Ahhhhhhh such lovely words . Your heart speaks through your hands ...and it's all GOOD ! ............ G
2006-05-09


Teala
Wonderful!! What a lovely array of images and thoughts go through my mind!!
2006-05-08


Amanda Manmohan
Absolutely brilliant. I love the rhythm you put into it, and you very strongly conveyed your feelings with such few words. Well done.
2006-05-07


Alexander
Fantastic Zoya:D Fantastic:) Bravo:D:D


Love from Alex
2006-05-06



onyl one word for and that is mmmmmmmmm,,,huge u me
2006-05-06


Julie Shehata
I've read this poem over and over - absolutely mesmerizing.
What an amazing gift you possess.
2006-05-06


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Ashes to ashes
and dust to dust
I LOVE THIS POEM!
REBIRTH THROUGH DEATH!
I REALLY LOVE THIS POEL!
((((((((HUGS))))))))))
2006-05-06


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
aw zoya, absolutely beautiful, sweet, wonderful, amazing. bookmarked this one. this made my heart leap. : ) kathy
2006-05-06


lastromantichero
hi there Zoya

Gently do the whispers fall
for you sweet one I give my all
this is such a lovely poem from thee
Dearest sweetest Zoya Zaidi

well done dear lady rgds mikexxxlolol
dont mind a kiss from a romantic doyou
;-)
2006-05-06