to make of what you will :-)


Three nights

For three nights we slept on the beach
you and me, a guitar, a song and a lilt
to the crashing waves,
we beachcombed our love
and then afterwards
I boarded a train,
took a taxi in the fast lane
as we drove to the docks
and met you
wearing a lei
of sunshine smiles,
oh to be young
and in love
and watching your slow smile
light up the dawn
I would gilt
and soften lint
just to lie
for another night with you.




Poetry by Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-02-08 at 20:15

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Nancy Sikora The PoetBay support member heart!
So beautiful and romantic.
2016-02-09


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
You have made it a very nice poem, and one that is interesting. It's not sad. It's just a wish that you again could enjoy something that is gone.
2016-02-08


Ivan R
A love poem as good as one is done, with great feel, and with such a beautiful sigh ...
2016-02-08