| Senseless
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2006-07-11
It hurts, but described beautifully! Keep it up!
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| Masquerade
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2006-07-11
I'm stuck at the last part, "sensation of euphoria" to the end is just great and placing it together with the masquerade makes me sad. Hiding is no place for love, if that is the feeling... Really really liked it!
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| ANNOUNCEMENT FOR ALL
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2006-05-09
sounds great!
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| Robed in Borrowed Clothes
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2006-05-04
real nice!!
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| My Pant is Colourful Than Yours
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2006-04-30
Made me think of something very important... Good writing good thinking!
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| A Dimpled Smile
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2006-04-29
I really liked this one, have to show it to my girl, though I wish I could've made up those words too!! =) You write what I'd like to say! Keep it up!
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| When You Break A Heart, You Break A Girl
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2006-04-29
Good writing, but you made me sad!! I truly hope you will be feeling better soon! Big hugs!
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| Fine Dust
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2006-04-21
Tough journey to the wnd but I'm glad you've chosen to deliver this because we all can feel this sometimes, more or less, we feel it. I really liked this one and the "pin me" "hurt me" "heal me" part was great!
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| A Future lost
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2006-04-01
I have to read something happier now, cuz this one brought me down! Really great poetry and a really sad piece!
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| Choice To Be
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2006-04-01
I especially liked the part with the dirt and the bleach! Nice thought, nice choice to write it down for us all to share!
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| Camera of oddity
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2005-11-05
I think it is necessary, and I think you did!
Keep it up and throw in some more pictures of the world of oddity of which you speak!
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| Princess In Rags
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2005-10-28
great, horrible situation, but great poetry!
you make me feel I'm there, observing, watching, contributing to her lonelyness. makes me feel bad, but most importantly, makes me feel!
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| Jane Doe
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2005-09-29
sounds like an awfull experience...
I liked the way you described what' going on. I feel like I'm right there in the crowd watching
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