TERRORISTS
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2005-10-02 True words you write here. Really something to think about.
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South Will Rise Again
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2005-10-02 You must be proud!
This was a really good song. I hope, think and belive these words will be helpful to the poor people who suffer.
A great song!
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No, Seriously
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2005-10-02 I couldn't agree more! =D
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One Single Tear
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2005-10-02 I almost started to cry!
So many feelings in these words. Well written, a great piece of work!
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Why?
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2005-09-30 Drugs can be so cruel!! I've been down that road...
A great poem though, it was like I could feel the pain.
Wish you all the best in life!
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Tears of Pain
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2005-09-30 Think I know the feeling.
A good piece of work though!
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Alone
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2005-09-30 Short, but nice. Few words that tells so much. Very good!
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Forever in my heart...
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2005-09-30 I can't imagine how painful it is to lose someone that way. I'm truly sorry for your loss!
The poem was so warm and nice, really enjoyed reading it!
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Death is an Insomniac's Dream
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2005-09-30 Dark and powerfull. I recognized my self in it. But even though it was dark, I found something peacefull in it.
Very good poem!
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Jane Doe
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2005-09-29 Have you written something like this before? I felt I had read something like it.
But this was good though, sad, but good!
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Godess of bronze
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2005-09-29 I love this time of year, so many warm colours.
Enjoyed reading your poem, a very good piece of work!
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when?
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2005-09-29 Dark, but good!!
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Obstacle of Fundamental Love
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2005-09-29 This I really liked!
Filled me with hope. A great poem!
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You Suicidal Spirit
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2005-09-29 I understand :)
But I won't give 5 to anything!! I gave 3 to one too...not that it matters though, but I guess you've read the one I ratet 5. I really thought that was that good!! I don't give 5 to be nice, I give what I give because I mean it.
And I'm sorry if I seem uninterested, but I don't know what to say. I read so many comments with great words, and all I can say is that I really liked what I read or that I think it is really good. My english is not at all good.
Don't know if you understand what I mean, it's hard to explain...
But if I should say something else too, just a little something I've noticed. It's not(!!) many who likes to give comments to people who don't apreciate it (Iknow I wrote that wrong, sorry!)
A simple thank you would be enough. Many don't respond to their comments, I do. I've read a lot of poems with comments in here, not many write back and say thank you... I just think you should think about that too ;)
I really don't mean to be rude or anything about this, but you've told me what I can do better and I respond as good as I can to that.
And I'll do my best to show more interest when I come in here :)
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You Suicidal Spirit
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2005-09-28 Wow :)
Nice respons!
Yes, I said I didn't write just for the comments, I write because I want people to read, that's what's important for me. And I didn't mean in anyway to say that this site is low in anyway!! I like this site, and I do take time to read poems here, and so many are very good!! But if it is so important that I comment everything I read, I'll do so.
Hopefully none of you think I'm mad now, because I'm really not. I'm very glad you tell me such things. Now I know what I can do better :)
And by the way, thanks for helping me!! Seems I really need all the help I can get ;)
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You Suicidal Spirit
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2005-09-28 Yes it's always nice to find a comment, but that's not my reason for writing :)
And I'm not often in here, but I have given comments my self, though I don't remember to who.
Mostly I'm on another poem site, and there I always give comments to the poets.
But if you wish I spend more time commenting in here, I just might do so :)
Thanks for taking the time to write ;)
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You Suicidal Spirit
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2005-09-28 Thank you so much for your kind words!
It's written out of own experience.
I once was among those who sees the end as an only option. But after seeing how people react to this sort of thing, I just couldn't do it and asked for help instead.
Once again, thank you so much for your comment!
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In death is my peace
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2005-08-24 Thank you so much for your comments!! It really means a lot!!
There's probably many wrong spellings, but my english ain't perfect :o)
I'm just a norwegian girl, so there is still work to do with my english.
And you are right, my heart is in this one, well I leave my heart in almost everything I write, because I usually write about real things and feelings.
Thank you so much again for your comments!!
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I'm sorry!
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2005-08-23 cuz...thought I had changed that word. Sorry about that. I belive it is easy for other people to say it's just to stop, just quit. But it's a hell to get away from.
Now I've been lucky to get over the worst, but there's still a long way for me to go. But I'm really lucky though, I'm among the few who really gets the help we need to get out.
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I'm still here
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2005-08-23 Thanks for your comment!
No hard feelings here, I'm glad you show me where I write wrong!! That might help me become a better writer.
I'm very thankful!!
And yes, it is sad with drugs and watch all those who die because of it. Hopefully I get out someday.
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