| CARING FOR FREINDS (Added Line)
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2023-06-07
You seem like a good friend.
But keep in mind that friendship goes both way.
If you don't get reciprocity, then you are just a compassionate person, who cares for others. Which is holy and above friendship.
God bless!
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| NAKED
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2023-06-07
Can totally relate to this.
Humans in general spend too much time worrying about what others think about them, which in turn affects on how you think about yourself.
It takes courage to be "Naked" not to care about what others think and to be brave enough to accept yourself for yourself.
Nicely done!
God bless!
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| A lone boat at sea wanders by Ann Wood
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2023-06-07
The take away I got from reading this:
The man and the boat is like the mind in the human body. A vessel that goes through the ocean of earthly existence aimlessly. Alone in one's mind where no one truly understand the sadness accumulated through life. Where seagulls and vultures (people with bad intentions) always lurks in the darkest corners.
I hope the sailor will find a shore, where they can find fulfilment and peace.
Well done and God bless!
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| The Fall of the Leaf
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2023-06-07
Wow this is deep.
Cycle of seasons is like the cycle of life. To observe the seasons is to understand life as a whole.
Sometimes we meet resistance in life, which can be compared to the seasons of fall and winter, where trees lose their leaves and some animals go to hibernate.
When spring and summer comes, they will flourish again.
Something to reflect about.
Well done and God bless!
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| The bliss that is
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2023-06-07
You did it again my man!
The Zen like words, while aligning the text in shapes.
I first understood this poem when you mentioned the rise and fall part, which is the essence of Buddhist mindfulness concept.
Really fascinating, well done!
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| PARADISE
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2023-06-06
Nice writing!
Funny that we posted poems with almost same theme today.
Well done and God bless!
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| Impermanent Eternity
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2023-05-18
Thanks alot for the feedback!
@Griffonner
Yes this is written as lyrics.
Any kind of poem can easily be translated into music. Especially when it have ABAB rhyme structure or similar.
Keep on writing what is in your heart, because it won’t get more pure than that.
@one trick pony
Can’t give the chords, because that would ruin the suprise of the release :)
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| The song of the moon
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2023-05-18
Love the oscilating form of the text, which blends well to the message.
Well done!
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| SAT TYPING (A VEAREATAN ON A THEAIM)
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2023-05-18
Creatively written from the dyslexic point of view.
Well done!
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| THE MIRROR NEVER LIES
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2023-05-18
With age comes experience and opportunity for self-reflection.
The deterioration of the body is a battle scar of life. Wear it with pride, because you have made it this far.
Blessings!
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| WORDS
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2023-05-18
Amen
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| Private Hell ...
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2023-05-18
Wow very visual representation of your inner feelings.
Poems tells alot about the person writing it.
I hope you will overcome the private hell of yours.
Nice writing!
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| Blindfold
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2007-03-17
Thanks
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from Denmark 