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2007-03-27
Definitely Wildfire. The idea was clear and made me think about how both the fire and man were desperate not to die. I don't think I considered a fire in that way before. The choas of the fight. etc.
The 2nd had a moving and powerful subject but did not seem quite as polished when compared to the first.
Your opinion is the one that matters most though.
Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
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| Drowning
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2007-03-27
Loved it. Really made me think about the effects of one's life on another. Good imagery all around.
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| Ode to the Kamikaze Mosquito
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2007-03-27
Loved the rhythm and flow of this poem! Not a subject that would normally hold my interest, but you certainly did here.
Nice job!
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| How to Offend a Fish
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2007-03-26
LOL... Been there, done that!
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| Clean
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2007-03-25
Loved it.
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| for Jesse James
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2007-03-24
Again, loved it.
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| Balloon
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2007-03-24
I like your voice.
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| Bridge Burning
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2007-03-24
Loved it.
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| Candy Apples
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2007-03-24
Again. Loved it.
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| Smiles and Salutations
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2007-03-24
I really like your work.
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| Soft White Linens
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2007-03-24
Favorite lines- 9 and 10 or 3 and 4 or 7 and 8-
aw..u know what I mean. Loved it.
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| The moon is full of it tonight
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2007-03-24
That title sucked me right in! I too have known nights when the moon was full ot it! Loved it.
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| I watch you watching her
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2007-03-23
I know this place. I've been here.
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from USA 