Ulysses

2005-06-07
Again your voice comes through clear and precise. A good read.

My only crit is the last two lines, they seem to miss the beat.

2005-06-07
This has all the hallmarks of Rap, and that's not a bad thing.

For the past 20 years Poetry and Rap have been budding cousins, and its only of late that people [those in the Rap scene] have begun to really appreciate poetry. Respect!

This I like: crop circle tricks - - excellent choice of words.

This also: stitching together your latest fake statements - - The reader can even hear the anger in your voice.

In all I enjoyed the read. Write on~