cordell

2009-08-02
I enjoyed this and the images that it brought to mind. I especially liked the phrase "with the fury of brimstone falling on Gomorrah," Great line

2009-06-04
THis has a nice feel but in the end I am left wondering what it is actually about. THE end, THE last ride? Overall I like it but I left me wanting more info.

2009-06-04
I like it.

2009-06-04
Is this poem about Decorum, or is it about the fear of pushing on to more intimacy? I liked it. Personally I think the first half is stronger than the second but then maybe that strengthens the quesion.