| Lost Innocence
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2009-08-13
Deep, and a little fatalistic. I really like the contents although I have doubts concerning repetitive poems.
/Crake
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| The Undine Calleth
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2009-08-04
Another brilliant poem, I will go through all of yours if I have time some day.
Thanks/Crake
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| Forgotten Maria
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2009-08-01
I really like your change in tone of the personna. However I would have liked some rhyme, perhaps a line in each stanza that rhymes. As you have a clear structure of four lines per stanza the reader might want a rhyme to hold on to.
/Fredrik
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| My Deity
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2009-07-30
Religion is the perfect thing to write about, and you do it really well. I wish that I had the same zeal.
/Crake
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| Adapting Existence
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2009-07-27
Very deep, we see what we want to see. I completely agree with you and I must confess that you put words on a very abstract thought I have had for a while... really since I started the IB.
thank you/ another lost poet
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