Dream VS Reality
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2005-12-11 very nice write! beautifully and subtly erotic, loaded with emotion and with a great twist that tied it all together in the end... well done!
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Desire
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2005-12-02 beautiful poem..! i have a certain attraction to the darkness described, and i think it's very well, easily but thoroughly, written..
tops!
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Without 'U?'
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2005-11-27 yes! brilliantly original... wonderf_l idea and bea_tif_l writing ;)
s_perb!
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Lonely
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2005-11-16 oh so much pain... i feel you, surely do. even though the subject has been somewhat overused this wonderful poem comes out with fresh tears on its cheek. very well done!
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Judgement Day
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2005-11-15 a really nice way to put into words the search for the meaning of things..! good!
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