| The last Kiss by M.A.Meddings
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2007-02-07
Nice little poem here. About a thing to remember. One sure doesn't forget things like that!
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| it is hard to explain
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2007-02-03
This goes straight into my heart, even before I've read it all. Just for the record, though, "instans" is spelled instance, I think.
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| Christian Doubt
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2006-12-22
This is very good. The beauty of that singing..!
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| Please Give Us Our Tea Back by M.A.Meddings
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2006-11-13
A nice, thoughtful text, with both humor and an ounce of spite.
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| An Unsolvable Conundrum ~Me~
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2006-07-06
The core here is really very good. But, the sentences are rather long. I think it'd be even better, if you shortened them.
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| I'm Fabulous
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2006-06-07
Actually, I think it's spelled "Fabulous", without two "o". But anyway, you're right - you are absolutely fabulous. Everyone are. Me too.
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| Staten och Kapitalet
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2006-05-05
That should be "Staten och Kapitalet", but perhaps you meant pluralis here...? Anyway, it's a scary and Kafka-like story you've made. Good!
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| As I sat down
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2006-04-28
Haha, that's nice. A kind of tranquil and comtemplating text. Like sitting on a bench with ones chin in ones hand and not really caring about clothes.
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| N/N/N
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2006-02-02
Thanks Zoya. That warmed my heart. And a five! Now that's really so sweet of you! E.
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from Sweden 