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Untied shoelaces made it possible

2005-07-01
Hi,

no I'm not mocking poetry, at least that's not my intention. Although I'm not to keen on traditional poetry, I like dada, beat and L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E. And also: just because it doesn't make sense, it doesn't have to lack a value. But if you don't like what I write, that's ok, it wouldn't be any fun if everybody liked everything all the time. Also, I'm not used to write in english, maybe my "poems" will be different in the future. We'll see. Have a nice evening.


Boy and Girl

2005-07-01
Ah, the alternative ending is much better, the rime cool=fool feels somewhat geeky. This is the first poem I read on this page, and I liked it.