A CO Writing with Night Soul Woman
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The battle co writing with Night Soul Woman



The battle and the honour

The slaughter and burn
take life's out
nothing in return

But the blood
on their hands
silent is waiting

For revenge
the dark in their heart
start to burning again

And a new battle
is starting
over again





The battle and the death




The battle and the death
honour and pride
the empowerment of the beast inside

The smell of the burned bodies
still wonders in the atmosphere

Each candle burns for each soul
lost in the battle field

Each drop of blood drains
on the earth by the sunlight

Each ray of light a reminder
of life's worth

Politicians thirst for power
results to myriad deaths

Mass graves that are still
not to be found have a story to tell

About cruelty and pain
the feeling of helplessness

slaughtered and disembodied
body parts

Families that will always
wonder and hope

if their child is still alive
or
buried underground
after suffering a horrible death

The screams of the innocents
must remind us what really matters

Love your fellow human
Live in peace and harmony

What is life worth if we don't have all that?

More money and power
doesn't bring happiness

Only pain and suffering
Listen to the silence

And hear the children
screaming for help

Where were you when they called
for your help?

- My angels I could not help you
back then but I will always remember that:

War is not the answer!!!
- Fly away my angels

away from the human cruelty
Heaven's doors are opening for you

Fly away and live in peace...
Find what we couldn't give you...


Coming back to life

It is so Hard baby
but I am struggling
to overcome myself

To ride the wind
and getting back to life
what I have seen

Is just a nightmare
but fuck so true
hope no one else

Going to see the same
and I am ashamed
I didn't could do more

I have cried rivers
of all my tears
waking up with nightmares

But I am not ever give up
because I am still tuff
and the battles never ends

So still and slow
I return to life
thank you my love

You never give up
my life
peace love and understanding




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-06-26 at 20:46

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Arti
This is such a poignant, heart-rending write about the realities of war! So much sorrow, so much pain before, during and after the war, sketched by you both so skillfully.
2006-06-27


Kathy Lockhart
This co-write is filled with vivid images of war and destruction with all the horrors that fall upon those who are involved in its mayhem and those who are innocent of its cause. I am overwhelmed with sorrow. wonderful write from both of you. I think you won that battle of the co-write together! kathy
2006-06-26



Good job, you guys!
2006-06-26


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
well done dan i love co writing and the challenge it brings rgds mike this poem describes it so well
2006-06-26


New Heart
I love this poem, it speaks of love, passion, and the imagery really made this poem come to life. I love this co-write. You should read Love Angel's co-writes with Love Knight, they are so touching, like this one.
2006-06-26

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