its my first time that I write something like this so please be kind :D But do comment so I can improve my writing style :)




Am a poet on bay



Am a poet on bay
on poet bay
poetbay dot com

I am here to claim
my place in fame
in the hall of fame
of oblivion

Don't look at me
like this
you know what
I mean

You need the rush
but you know
that
this

you
can not
dismiss

it's not

forever
forever
forever

But this is what
you wish

to make it be
forever

open you eyes
look at you
listen to yourself

Grab your pen
and write

Your fear
Your Lust
Your pain
Your Love

Publish it

and tell me
Miss
I think you are right

I am here to claim
my place in fame
in the hall of fame
of oblivion

Cause am a poet on bay
on poet bay
poetbay dot com





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Written on 2006-07-25 at 01:46

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Audrey Barber
Must say written with intent, written with meaning, written ambihition. So do not just give up, keep the pen to paper.
Poetbay.com it is.
2006-08-25


barbie
May we all continue to write from our hearts, our minds, and encourage each other to pursue whatever our dreams may be,..never, ever give up. Barbie
2006-07-25



yAH you are a poet or a poetess whatever!!! a poet of fame!!! great work night!!!!kissess
2006-07-25


Arti
Love this.. I personally prefer the more classic styles of poetry, but you make me rethink my preference for the rhyme and flow.. :)) Great job!!
2006-07-25


Malin Johansson
Beautiful my friend :)))
I smiled when I read this one..
and for the first time writing like this it's amzingly good :))
Regards and hugs
2006-07-25


wee2souls
love this write..
for sure you need no
improvement
you write with such ease
you write with much heart
and soul!
gifted for sure..the poet you truly are..:)
hugs
cindy
2006-07-25

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