Arti
"The ravens proclaim the lost innocence"... gripping... Thanks for the history/geography lesson down there in the comments.. I didn't know that. :))
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2006-07-27

night soul woman
did you know that:Elvy E. Callaway claimed that near Bristol was the location of the Biblical Garden of Eden. He made this claim because the area is home to the world's only four-headed river system. It is also home to stands of gopher wood, which Noah is said to have used to construct his ark.
2006-07-26

Kathy Lockhart
This is an amazing poem. I feel that there are two poems in one. If this were to be true, my favorite is:
"
I feed the ravens,and
the flowers are arrayed
so beautifully

What is the pursuit of
my heart?
The desert sun

lights up my path
while the ravens
sing and dance
round and round,

croaking softly
from deep within
their throats

hear ye! hear ye!
heavens above
my laughter and cry

the raven is
Soaring through the sky
in graceful, rag-winged flight,
a messanger heralding

transformation and change.
she lands on my shoulder
and touches her beak
to my ear and neck

Let my heart just sing...
all night long...
while the ravens
proclaim the lost innocence."

Those are my favorite lines. I felt them deeply. :) kathy
2006-07-26

lastromantichero
what an amazingly tallented poet you are this text is so rythmic in its use of words and line format well done rgds mike
2006-07-26