Arti
I love this game of charades....:) Good job! hope you're feeling better....
((hugs))
2006-07-29

Malin Johansson
I can do this dance too :))) beautiful My friend... the pain always fades away and then joy and hope comes in :)))
B E A U T I F U L
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Malin
2006-07-29

Kathy Lockhart
Deeply moving, excellent expression of surrender, death, and resurrection into a new strong life! Lots of strength in this poem. Lots of hope! Love the form! xx kathy
2006-07-29

F.i.in.e Moods
the two spectrums - sorrow and joy mixed in this... but then the end is like a liberation of sorts... i feel it very uplifting really... i liked the part:

"2 teams
past and present
Future and I" -

it caught my attention that one... the past and present, then the future with self - in my mind the imagery i saw each of these things as entities... powerful ones that can determine destiny, or destroy it... depends on the attitude and chosen approach to each of these aspects of life...

this is as always an excellent creation of yours... a delight to read... thanks for sharing :f

*hug* xx
2006-07-29