In my ocean of emotions


Far from human eyes
exists an undiscovered
world

I dive in my ocean of emotions
I have pass the dead sea
taking the Copper Scroll with me

familiar emotions
with undiscovered depths
I dive in and swim

Veiled by water and far
below the surface,
the mysterious

dark ocean conceals
the last undiscovered
depths of the soul

dive once again
swiming with the dolphins
Underwater mountains

oases of life
currents well up
and swirl around

their slopes
groves of towering
corals reach up

into the darkness
ancients forests
of the deep

sea spiders, whelks
octopus weave their way
through the forest

while crabs and other
crustaceans hide
in crevices

Seamounts home to
strange and wonderful
creatures for millions
of years

an imminent confrontation
of good and evil
a gathering storm

Whales and sharks
hunt me
the dolphins defend me

where will
the waves take me
in my ocean of emotions?

a small glimpse into
the wonders of
the deep sea treasure

the human soul




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Written on 2006-08-01 at 11:39

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Dan Cederholm
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Hey NSW what a great poem here!!!

"I dive in my ocean of emotions
I have pass the dead sea
taking the Copper Scroll with me "

It is breathtaking and such a good work!

You write wonderful and have so much

talang!!!

Sincerely and kisses Dan


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2006-08-02


Arti
I swim deep below with you
Watching in awe the different hues
Of your soul wash over my own
....
2006-08-01


wee2souls
Beautifully written....expressions of the depth of the oceans... ones soul
loved this!!
hugs
cindy
2006-08-01


wee2souls
Beautifully written....expressions of the depth of the oceans... ones soul
loved this!!
hugs
cindy
2006-08-01


Sandy Hiss
I enjoyed reading this poem. Wonderful imagery, I could imagine all the details of the ocean while reading this and the words go deep.
2006-08-01


Will
Deep as an ocean write.
Very powerful and meaningful....

Very much enjoyed the read
2006-08-01


Kathy Lockhart
This is a great write. Your vivid desciptions of the oceans and the metaphorical references to your facing and dealing with each new deep emotion is outstanding. I love this! xx kathy
2006-08-01


Malin Johansson
Very good poem here...
to mix the feelings into the ocean, great !!
Emotions seems to come too much sometimes...
Hugs dear
2006-08-01

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