Valley of Ice ~Part 1~

As I walked through the valley of ice
I had no feeling, would my life suffice
Around were plains of blue
Above me gray
Chilling thoughts for all my flaws
I hadn't the time to even pause
My feet frozen and my hands the same
Would I survive
Numb inside and the cave ahead
I sought a solution for a change instead




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-10-08 at 22:20

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A very well thought out and beautifully produce poem young man. Can hardly believe your age. a must read indeed. I look forward to reading more. Smiling at you, You adapt the original beautifully, Tai
2006-10-10


Sabrina
Very cool, a chilling poem!

Ice ice baby! :)

Hugs,
Sabrina
2006-10-09


Zoya Zaidi
Very expressive and really descriptive,
I can feel the chill in my bones.
Well done Cool, itis cool...lol
(((hugs)))
Love,
Zoya
2006-10-08

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