This poem almost made me cry. I feel the emotion, i see the picture, congratalations. This poem is amazing. I love it. I love the language, the rhyme the rhytm.

~Kiva

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2006-11-26

wow aaron. i really liked that. not very many people write acronyms on here. this is the first one i read. good job. i loved it a lot. you should diffenitely write more.

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2006-11-24

tony legba
As an acrostic...yes it works.
Do you think the rhyme is needed? Especially when rhyme tends to force words into odd order.

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2006-11-23

Emelén
I meant a beautiful response to m y poem .. (Sometimes I talk of myself in third person and that can sound a bit weird) . There is a soothing continuation in this poem and I am deeply honoured by your response .
2006-11-23

Emelén
this is a very good acrostic poem and a beautiful response to Emeléns poem. the images here are bountiful and magical.
2006-11-23

Saga
Now this I call good and enticing art!!!!

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2006-11-23

lastromantichero
Hi there

are you so good with these poems and you fare the master of these nostalgic texts

rgds mike

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2006-11-23

BlueyedSoul
Inside I find you, a work of art
Nested within my loving heart

beautiful lines aaron...i loved the entire piece
~blue

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2006-11-23