My first sonnet so lets see where it takes me



Love's Escape (1st Sonnet)

Love hath shown in beauty and grace

For long and peaceful day

Till hate with hand and shadowed face

Locked fate away to slowly decay

Blind sighted by ignorance

Hate had not a clue

For love that wait in circumstance

Through adversity and taboo

With radiance shining bright

Love escapes hate's gripful cast 

Now alleviated of all hurt and plight

We run away from the past

Love's power shines forever strong

With facts like that you can't go wrong





Sonnet by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-11-25 at 02:15

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This is a good sonnet, i love the context, it reminds me of my poems, this poem touched me, i felt something, something undescribable, when i read this sonnet, it is wonderfully put together, and i like your vocabulary, some people just use words they dont understand but you understand and utilize the words well and correctly. Congratulations on your first sonnet.

~Kiva
2006-11-26


BlueyedSoul
I'm no expert, but i can tell you in all graciousness, that this is quite lovely and you have every reason to be proud of this your first sonnet aaron!!

~blue
2006-11-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Aaron this isa lovely sonnet and so flowing the message is clear and loving

I believe it to be a sonnet of some form but the range in sonnets these days is so wide
but it is beautiful and congratulations rgds mike
2006-11-25


Kathy Lockhart
Aaron this has a beautiful flow and message.
2006-11-25

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Love: The Endless Journey
by Coolaaron88