Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is sheer brilliance! There are so many lessons here. It's like an text entire book written in a few stanza's of a poem. I can see discussions being held on this line by line. "Fight for the part, win for the whole", that's a discussion. "Battles are personal between the souls", that is a discussion, "Choices made influence mankind", that is a discussion. and on and on. Brilliant! Just Brilliant!
2007-03-06

penfold18
Never a truer word was spoken , such a pity that politicians of this world continue not to see whats in front of them, a wonderfull poem Kathy.
2007-03-04

night soul woman
Thank you for this masterpiece Kathy!It speaks volumes to me :) ahhhh. . . That ripple effect of our - my actions. . .*storm of applause*I will treasure those words, this poem in my heart forever :)*bookmarked*
2007-03-04

Zoya Zaidi
So, true and full of spirit!
I love this write by you dear Kathy,
Your strength of soul and resiliece
shines through this brilliant piece of art!

((hugs))
Love, Zoya
2007-03-04

kath
Life is a complex place to dwell in ........

but also so uncomplicated in a way ... as your poem states if we stay close to the belife that we can make a difference, in a way that is not made to punish or hurt others... and love is the beginning and the end in this, that is what I belive ...

your imageries here are very strong and beautiful and makes this poem a statement ... crafted with beauty ... and beauty comes along with love ...

best wishes
katherine
2007-03-04

lastromantichero
this poem is the complete truth and i applaud you for writing this it demonstrates what an allround writer you are
well done Katherine
rgds Michael xxxylk
2007-03-04