These are the words that I could not tell to my old friend for we have lost all the contact. I am sorry that she will not be able to hear them.


49) Sorry for your Friendship

I have only a question my friend
Why you turned your back
Leaving without making amends that fast
You did trade our friendship at ease
And believe it til today am unable to find
A good reason that made you fight
How futile your battle if your only purpose was to win
How pointless was your weapon if it meant to hurt you at the end
Open your mind, see with your eyes and above all open you heart
The one you were harming shared you your laughs
The one you were attacking was handing you tissues as your cried
Didn cross her mind once that you would be such brutal
Didn imagine oneday that you're gonna be her foe and that awful
It will make any heart sigh to witness a friend who kept in the past her oath to stand under all weathers so bold
To turn as a snake moving under the grass
To taint with its poision then turns her back




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2007-03-28 at 08:45

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binesh
So touching , Amanda. What a sensitive piece of work ! beautiful indeed
2007-04-01


Yummy_guy
this is a very beautiful poem to read

Love u, Yummy_guy
2007-03-31


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
the hurt, betrayal is strongly felt... :( *hugs* why people act the way they do sometimes is difficult to understand... especially when the person happens to be a 'friend'... the feelings are well expressed here... can't help connect, and hope all goes well for you soon *hugs* xx
2007-03-29


Richard
This is hopelessly sad.
I know the feeling too.
Great work, though.
Richard
2007-03-29


salem
sorry for what happened
yr poem realy wrote in depth
2007-03-29


nature
maybe your friend served their purpose in your life
well done though a stunning poem
2007-03-28


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so sad
and wonderful written.

I am sorry about
your friend.

It is true we often
cut our noses off dispite
our face in certain
situations, creating
problems where there
need not be.

Very thought-provoking.

L.
2007-03-28


yoonoos peerbocus
the anatomical autopsie in language of poetry is fantastically carried out .nice.
2007-03-28

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Wings of wishes
by Amanda K