74) Forgive Love

Why do we appreciate the light after darkness.
Health after sickness.
Success after failure.
And love after departing.
You were always by my side,
Sad or mad,
You offered your kindness and I was totally blind.
I couldn't least thank you
for what have you done to make my day bright.
Or that you have tried
to erase the dark clouds out of my mind.
In each night you surrounded me
with your arms to warm.
And I was just receiving with no gratitude.
Consumed by work and all I had to do.
But the day arrived in which you were out of sight.
When you decided to leave;
And end the story of love from one side.
I said ok and didn mind.
But shortly after that,
I saw how empty my life was,
My house was dead,
Flowers were close to decay,
Bed was big,
No one could ever see the smile of my face.
And it's your shadow that I started to trace.
Finally,I found you at last, broken heart.
Consequently cried for the first time so hard.
But your arms ran to hold mine.
And said I miss you back.




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2007-07-31 at 08:07

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Yummy_guy
I like it ...well done
Love you Yummy_guy
2007-08-18


ime ita
it is really touching,its good to appreciate the presence of someone when you are wit thw person so as not to loose the person and appreciate the absence.
2007-08-01


Will
Great write it's not often that we get that chance again.
I'm happy for your happy ending.

Luckily it will make you appreciate it more


AMAZING WRITE!!!!!!!
2007-08-01


kid
touching moving and emotional
2007-07-31


nature
absolutely beautifull Amanda
2007-07-31

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Wings of wishes
by Amanda K