right this nite.....

Let me thrash about
Singing songs of hope,
And singing songs of despair.

Nothing in my world is wrong;
Nothing in my world is right.
My eyes blink for a century.

If God has a plan,
I need to see it soon.
Nothing I do, makes me smile.




Poetry by JK Fisher
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Written on 2016-05-27 at 07:45

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very powerful. the line "My eyes blink for a century" is great. Life speeds up unfortunately.
2016-06-01


Kathy Lockhart
I know exactly those feelings by how you described them with the imagery you created. In other words...I saw what you felt.
In seeing what you feel, I feel it. I empathize. Your poetry emotes. Very moving.
2016-05-28


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Quite sad. It conveys the feeling so well.
2016-05-27


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
An interesting , work , JK.
Ken :)
2016-05-27