A free verse of never giving up.


Never Surrender

Clashing with predicaments on earth,
Adversities confront you to the finish.

Conflicts try to seize your soul,
Aiming to hold you as a hostage.

As your flag is held way up high,
Feuds can turn it upside down.

Admitting defeat will cause agony,
Leading to the challenges from grief.

Oppose all enemies in the vicious battles,
Confronting the threats to dedication.

Never surrender to the war of life,
Prevailing to the path from glory.




Poetry by Survivor48
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Written on 2016-07-09 at 15:59

Tags Inspirational  Spiritual  Poem 

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Kathy Lockhart
AMEN! I love the marching rhythms and the pounding force of each line of purposeful statements. This is truly inspirational and effective in moving those to never surrender!! bravo!!
2016-07-09



"Never surrender to the war on life."
Well said.
2016-07-09



I agree with your passion to never surrender, but the path to victory is not with violence. How else can we fix the predicaments on earth. Never more war! There must be another way with our amazing brains, why can't we figure it out?
2016-07-09