Its a sick feeling, but its a good one just the same. The weird feeling in your stomach when you're on the knife edge of life, saying the things that will either lead to a plunge or something great...
but this doesn't begin to capture that.


The Best Queasy Feeling In the World

Its like you will be dead
in a moment
but now is utter perfection

but even though this dread
is creeping through
this true so true affection

this feeling is what prooves things real.

You live with your heart.
You die in your head.
Let cages break and words be free.

you don't know who it is,
that one they say
will fill your heart day after day

So why not her's or his
All these hearts around
none labeled 'forever', one way

to find the feeling that prooves things real.

You live with your heart.
You die in your head.
Let hearts open and reach for others.



Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-05-13 at 05:02

Tags Soul  Forever  Love 

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PoeticProcrastination
Yes.

I love this poem. And the idea behind it.
2006-05-14


CherryFairy
I agree with Ironic Banana!! YAY FOR QUEASY!!!
It's got a great rhythm to it and it has excellent flow.
I like the first stanza and the last stanza the most... and all the rest inbetween...
"You live with your heart.
You die in your head.
Let hearts open and reach for others."
2006-05-13


IronicBanana
Wow... the flow was amazing and the words are so true! YAY, QUEASY FEELINGS!!!!
2006-05-13