WORLDS OF SORROWS VII


Worlds of sorrows.
No tomorrows.
Mind hollows.
Identity follows.

Horse and speed.
Crack indeed.
Force-feed.
Compulsory need.

Tired moan.
Bad to the bone.
Words on gravestone:
Cause of death unknown.

The outcast we ignore.
Human pride lies sore.
The weak and the poor
has no place at all.

Mind hollows.
Identity follows.
No tomorrows.
Worlds of sorrows.




Poetry by Daybreaker
Read 415 times
Written on 2006-05-14 at 04:30

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


gills
I just couldn't get anything from this - although I know there must be a huge amount of meaning behind each sentence... oh well I still enjoy reading your stuff
2006-10-25


Troll
indeed it is a world of sorrows. luckily, there are moments of joy along the way to ease time's passage. awesome with the rhyme scheme, i like it :)
2006-05-14


Zoya Zaidi
Wow! Again another beuty off your pen exposing the thruth in all its hues.
Bravo, dear Dan!
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-14


Kathy Lockhart
Wow! and Wow! again. dynamic truth so rawly exhibited! This truly is a hurting world. kathy
2006-05-14