Magnificent release, through words and punctuation. I hope and wish the emotions can be harvested through these lines.


Total Recluse.

Total Recluse

Cascading conscience,
Like the silent missionary-
Treating, spreading, invading
-stalking wisdom prevailing

Circuits bleeding, -
Overloading
Whispering veins
Red crystalline lost with meaning
White to stained, bloodshot-
Tainted rain

Religions abuse,
Total recluse-
Opinions monopolized
Ideas and truth, emotions to use,
-stalking philosophy of the hypnotized

Dug to deep,
Breaking through to,
Wisdom a-new, choices see-through,
Red road-
Map grand and bold

Between the bloodshot,
steal – sin – Sympathize,
Impure actions, sick to plot,
Second guess, thirds my prize


Fragmented soul,
Intruders' should not be last to-
Know, behold and bestow-
Opinions and feelings!
Native exhaustion takes control
Judged bloodshot – false: Hypnotized

Second guess, third eye realized.




Poetry by Sithre Lateralus
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Written on 2006-05-17 at 05:02

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tell you what I liked -
poetry can be so much about emotions and thoughts and feelings.... transmitted across by means of language.
Words, therefore, as vehicles of this transmission may sometimes be overlooked - but in this poem - words, of themselves are given a chance to be themselves in the spotlight - strutting their stuff (so to speak) and makes the poem's effect more intense and durable.

Your use of words has belied the rather timid and unassuming air that the title brings. This I consider a job well done :_)
2006-05-17